How to Make Your College Essay Shine

College students often ask, “What can help my essay stand out amongst thousands of college and scholarship applications?” Getting help from an experienced skilled tutor can help. Watch the video below to get some free tips from Coach Donna Marie who is an experienced writing tutor. Or if you’re ready for help now, use the button below to hire her now.

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Video Summary

Hi everyone, I’m Coach Donna Marie, your writing tutor. Today I’ll share important information about college application essays. A common question from high school seniors is:

“What are college and scholarship committees looking for in essays?”

Short Answer:

They want to understand who you are beyond grades and test scores. They wish to see your uniqueness. They evaluate how you’ll contribute to their community. They look for self-awareness, critical thinking, and clear communication skills. Let me break this down, especially for people of color and young women who sometimes discount their experiences.

First tip:

See yourself through the eyes of people who support you – coaches, teachers, mentors, family members who genuinely care. Learn to accept compliments gracefully.

Second tip:

Value your contributions, even seemingly mundane activities like babysitting. Ask trusted people for feedback about your strengths.

Third tip:

For self-reflection, try turning off all distractions – no social media, TV, or other inputs. Sit quietly with your thoughts. Keep a journal or recording device handy, even by your bed or in the bathroom. Great ideas can come at unexpected moments.

Fourth tip:

To improve your writing, read quality materials like historical biographies and professional journals. Good writing will influence your own writing quality.

To learn more about Coach Donna Marie, visit coachdonnamarie.com/tutor.

God bless with your academic journey.


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